you are really suffocating me

you are really suffocating me

— waiting for my final burst
waiting for that inner fire
to consume the whole of me
taking poison in every lungful of breath
looking for an oasis
I am stranded in this humanful desert
illusioned by those mirages
your magician displays

3 Responses

  1. apoorva says:

    Hi rock sea!

    why this poison, why this suffocation?

    this is an old post. hope u r breathing fine now.

  2. anubhavi says:

    roxy

    loved the idea of humanful deserts, beautiful methaphor which is not that beautiful
    why is it so that inspite of so many people we are all alone
    iroxy is it that we make ourselves so lonely
    i donno
    but your metaphor was touching
    i am looking for magician who will change everything

    anubhavi

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