how a one sided affair can be deepened into,,
On Tue, 2004-07-20 at 00:18, anna the anonymous wrote:
The not-so-gentle tug inside my insides,
The time has come to give up some blood,
To feel all woman,all mother-someday-to-be,
God punished,cursed,Eve accepted,shamed.
O but the sheer joy of being a woman,
The laughter of a girl-woman mensturating,
The quiet cry of a girl in monthly pain-
Would I give all this up to be a man?
Never!not as long as the world will be,
For there’s power and beauty in womanhood
THere’s strength and romance,love and zeal.
Tiny goblets,huge clots,all mine,all Earth’s.
On Tue, 2004-07-20 at 20:07, rock the sea wrote:
tiny goblets,huge clots,all yours huh?
shall i with my gallant manhood
have a not-so-gentle tug inside ur insides
the time has come to give up some life
to feel all woman and man together as one
god punished,cursed,adam n eve accepted,shamed
o but the sheer joy of being together
the laughter of a woman in my arms
the satisfaction in being inside you as u cry
would we give all this up to be alone?
never!not as long as the world is ours
for there’s power and beauty in togetherness
there’s strength and romance, love and zeal
tiny goblet,huge clots,let retreat for a while
let life a new begin, between us, inside us
why cant every man can think in this way?
your reply is an ideal one but the reality is harsh.
I am not critical but it is true…
but i must say that its an excellent poem
Hats off to you
keep on writing poems, you wont find any new additions…
wht i liked about your poem is that they are simple and expressed nicely…
directly touches ones heart.
Beautiful… nothing more fulfilling than being a woman and nothing more beautiful than to be together, pleasurable and creating life and being happy
Beautiful verses Rocky and sarah…
🙂
this is good….well expressed
came to u from guria
Objectivism and evolution blended to capture the nuances of nature ………radical too……
I am not particularly good at packaging so I’ll give it direct – I did not understand if this was a good poem or a bad poem,simply because there’s no benchmark that I can refer or read or think of.
Truly original thoughts on something which has been on for 12 times a year ever since life began…and we get a poem about it only in 2009! Truly an Original post. I don’t recall reading a poem on menstruation ever.Kudos for the attempt.
Hey Gyanban, thanks for the straightforward comments. I guess it doesn’t matter that much, on how this poem is, if it has conveyed the message 🙂
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
You affected my thinking process forever. (Thank God in a good way) 🙂
Guria, am glad for supplementing a different perspective to your thoughts 😀
I have linked to this poem of yours in my latest post… I hope you do not mind… pls tell me if otherwise… actually I love this poem so much… the idea, the feel… that I want everyone to read it 😛 🙂
am happy about the views your pointed out at your website “on being a female” 🙂 have commented there. cheers,,
this is one beautiful expression roxy…cant believe I missed out on all these works of yours…was searching for the “ugly duckling”one …i love that ….
ur website is just amazing…juby’s works are so cute and warm..overall ..the site is interesting and lovely…
Thanks for the lovely remarks, divYa. Hope you found the ugly duckling poem 🙂
hmm…sensual, enchanting ..so, some guys do think a lil more than ‘wham bham, thank you ma’am’????
thanks krishnapriya, male enlightenment* (?)
hi great expreince??????
beautiful reply
der is so much completeness in this poem
it made me to dream
i cant write
my heart is still beating
after reading ur poems……
amazing work roxy
anubhavi
anubhavi,
am happy that you feel good reading the poem 🙂
thanks a lot for all your comments!
roxy
mmmmmmmmm,i really liked it
Amazing and intresting to see ur Blog.A mixture of opposites and bundle of contradictions.Me too doing research in MG University Kottayam.Do mail me sonyjraj@yahoo.com or call me 9447069460
sorry i pasted wrong url 🙂
This’s indeed lovely….
sarah, keep track, ok?
i should say the rock part talks to sarah!
Cool!
wow…this is good!