one world one sky,, well there was one kite fest at the miramar beach at goa.. sometimes in life, whatever u see around u can link to things happening in ur life
like kites on flight, entangled
one has to go down
for the other to soar high
my life-thread broken
i take a dip
thrash my heart on a tree branch
i went down
i donno where i left my heart
whether the other kite plucked from me
or my heart got pinned on the pointed branch
for it pained when going down
i donno where i left my heart
i lost it somewhere on the way
i sink into the muddy sand
[some blood and sand splashed on the kite
funny design, someone who saw the kite said]
how true tagore said
the heart is for taking away,,
why not your heart is on the other kite which flied high up in the sky?
Thanks for pointing this out to me. Nice one 😀
roxy,
dont u think roxy, heart is also be given away?
ya but better to someone who will take care of it 😉
and am so happy i gave it away to sarah 🙂
this is an awesome poem.
great job. xx_