flesh to flesh it seemed
but i gave in my heart where the body got lost
pushed the curtains aside
let the moonlight in
for i wanted to see her all over
how she smiled in my arms
how the moonlight glistened on her cheeks
i go deep thru her waist-chain
she says it has grown into her flesh, her waist-chain
let me also grow with you,,
entwined with the chain i fused into her soul
…
flicker o’ flicker, the heart goes falter
flicker o’ flicker, the power goes off
the mantras of feverish love on which i thrived
the dreams of life n love on which i sailed
my source of verve
my blood thru nerve
all ended up like a dispassionate miscarriage,,
Hi Rock Sea-Sarah!!
This truly appears to be one of the most fabulous pieces of work i may have come across! Truly elegant & classy to the core..
By the way i too write sometimes when mood-swings take-over .. would love to be reviewed by you wheneva time permits.
Don’t yet have enough material to compile an entire blog though but one of these websites where my poem was published:
voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=151922
And 1 last request if you could kindly shed in your most frank reviews on the same.. cuz i might not yet be an accomplished writer though but just an attempt / 1 step further towards perfectionism. Your comments would be a treasure to keep!
Truly astounding work this.